I agree with her messenger, but I dislike the presentation. It was not capturing. I Lost interest from the begining. I though it was a picture going out. The words was two small, and too many. The author was very depressing in the begining. If this was not my assignment, I would have ended it from the begining.
I think it would be better if they had pictures with emotion, and other things that could have had a dramtic effect. The message was to long, and to dry. To summary they should have just K.I.S.S. kept it (sweet & simple)
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